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Post by AmysGames on Apr 9, 2008 8:22:32 GMT -7
Aiiro No KunoichiAiiro No Kunoichi is--shock, surprise--not a game, but a webcomic! Starring a girl named Sanori Minosei, you can follow the adventures of the unique family as they find their new home in America. This thread is for discussing the comic. What you like about it, what you think could be improved, and of course, speculation for what happens next! (in spoiler boxes, of course.  ) And since I'm at it... if any of you could help correct my Japanese in the first comic, I would be ever grateful. ^_^;
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Post by Celestial on Apr 9, 2008 9:36:23 GMT -7
=3 I liked it! The Taxi was prettyful and the stove *glomp*ing was very funny. XD I never thought a stove could recieve so much love.
Your art style is also very nice especially the detail on the eyes. Can't wait to see the next part. ^^
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Post by AmysGames on Apr 9, 2008 17:14:35 GMT -7
=3 I liked it! The Taxi was prettyful and the stove *glomp*ing was very funny. XD I never thought a stove could recieve so much love. Your art style is also very nice especially the detail on the eyes. Can't wait to see the next part. ^^ Why thank you, Celestial.  And stoves need love! They're the ones who do all your cooking, right? And since you brought up the taxi... if anyone wants to see it without the speech balloon in front of it, just because, I have a picture of it here. |
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Post by caleb on Apr 18, 2008 21:48:25 GMT -7
My favorite part was the frame where Danny was all shiny with the basket, saying, "Greetings and salutations!" The expression was just right!
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Post by AmysGames on Apr 19, 2008 10:54:18 GMT -7
My favorite part was the frame where Danny was all shiny with the basket, saying, "Greetings and salutations!" The expression was just right! Thanks! Yeah, I like how that panel came out, too. |
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Post by ZariKrahia Ailden on May 15, 2008 21:04:28 GMT -7
Danny's hair looks a bit off in the behind-shot. Mebbe it should cover the back of his head more?
...Sanori's dad (or the taxi driver, Iono!)'s head has been meeped out by a speechbubblelolz.
I had to say that, sorry. It's just funny.
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Post by AmysGames on May 16, 2008 6:55:29 GMT -7
Danny's hair looks a bit off in the behind-shot. Mebbe it should cover the back of his head more? ...Sanori's dad (or the taxi driver, Iono!)'s head has been meeped out by a speechbubblelolz. I had to say that, sorry. It's just funny. Yeah, admittedly I've never been that good at back views. XD; Hair being one of the main reasons. I'll keep that in mind the next time I do a back view... And those silly speech balloons like to get in the way, don't they!  |
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Post by lizzie on May 18, 2008 7:41:47 GMT -7
cute! Very... odd.... also, in the first few pannels, its all japanese. i dont understand it.
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Post by AmysGames on May 18, 2008 11:54:03 GMT -7
cute! Very... odd.... also, in the first few pannels, its all japanese. i dont understand it. Thanks! ^_^ And the first panels are meant to be in Japanese. But if you want to know what the English translations are (roughly), then here you go. SANORI: So this is America...
MRS. MINOSEI: Americans speak English!
SANORI: Right, right... "Hello! My name is Sanori!"
MRS. MINOSEI: Good! Excuse me! Taxi? |
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Post by lizzie on May 18, 2008 15:52:37 GMT -7
thanks!
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Post by GLQ on Mar 29, 2012 21:53:26 GMT -7
Interesting where the comic has taken direction the last few pages. I like it. ^^
Also, I find it rather amusing that Merritt keeps referring to Sanori in her Indigo Ninja form as a "he". xD I guess the outfit kinda hides it a bit?
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Post by AmysGames on Apr 2, 2012 14:48:12 GMT -7
Interesting where the comic has taken direction the last few pages. I like it. ^^ Also, I find it rather amusing that Merritt keeps referring to Sanori in her Indigo Ninja form as a "he". xD I guess the outfit kinda hides it a bit? Thanks! ^_^ And yeah, how well I depict it varies, but the concealing nature of the outfit makes it harder to tell that she's female. XD |
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And stoves need love! They're the ones who do all your cooking, right?
